I think that the humor Sedaris used while making fun of people made him seem less harsh. This made it easier for me to read because I wasn't so taken back on how cruel he was being.
But because I want to keep challenging you, it could be even stronger if you said what kind of humor he used (making fun of people? witty observations? dry humor?) and said what he seemed less harsh and cruel about.
I hope our workshop in class on Tuesday helped you generate some more ideas for your CP!
ReplyDeleteYes! This is much stronger.
ReplyDeleteBut because I want to keep challenging you, it could be even stronger if you said what kind of humor he used (making fun of people? witty observations? dry humor?) and said what he seemed less harsh and cruel about.